So, for posterity and your education adn amusement, I present you with my five failed entries:
silver-bladed leaf
etched in
deep-devoted words
edges drip in red
--
forced restructuring
empty bed and meals
for one
micro-managed loss
--
infomercial dreams
extruded mental
products
sponsored by McSleep
--
neon dinosaur
confused, abandoned,
alone
shadowed night
attacks
--
grey half-life faces
earthbound plastic
consciousness
collapsible minds
Ah, well. Back to trying to make my fortune from short stories and late night Baldur's Gate playing sessions....
2 comments:
At least you are trying to expand your repertoire. I always think of you as more of a Limerick type of guy but I liked your haiku. Sadly, I wasn't a judge. Better luck next time.
I never expect to win anything when I enter a poetry competition. I'm good enough to sell a few here and there, but never good enough to compete against real poets. It's too hard! :)
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